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Proottalfain

Age/Gender: 17, Male
Location: South Shore, Québec
Job: Student

I'm a french-speaking Canadian, more precisely a Quebecker. I don't receive a lot of PM's, so feel free to message me for anything that concerns me or things I've written. Or for anything you want to tell me.

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7/25/06

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Rank: Town Watch
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Exp. Points: 590 / 710
Exp. Rank #: 51,532
Voting Pow.: 5.00 votes

BBS Posts: 783 (1.07 per day)
Flash Reviews: 142
Music Reviews: 8
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Score: 9
Park my boat

"I'd like to park a..."

submission: Park my boat
date: April 11, 2008

plane. Or a helicopter. Or a horse.

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Score: 9
Lego Technic

"I don't think it's stolen"

submission: Lego Technic
date: April 11, 2008

I've watched some other stuff from him and it most of the time has the same quality of animation, and on some submissions he is credited. So if he would have stolen it, he would have stolen many animations from the same author and would have taken his name. It would be much trouble.

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Score: 9
New Shoes

"ORIGINALiTY"

submission: New Shoes
date: April 9, 2008

You get all your points for originality. I really liked the sound effects.

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Score: 8
Recycle!

"Nice!"

submission: Recycle!
date: April 9, 2008

Looks great, but really too short.

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Score: 0
[KK] Eighty-four?

"you don't master the art of looping"

submission: [KK] Eighty-four?
date: April 1, 2008

The background behind the 84's doesn't loop perfectly. My tip: make a motion tween, the first image looking exactly like the last, but of course the shape must be moved to it's second position where it loops. You created a motion tween between those two keyframes, now convert the frame just before the last one to a keyframe, and delete the last frame.

April 1, 2008

Author's Response:

Naw that's okay, I like it how it is right now.
It makes it classier.

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Score: 4
Hamination 4

"not very original"

submission: Hamination 4
date: March 28, 2008

Noobs often create threads on the BBS to tell this kind of story. You should add more sound, like a dramatic background music and mouse clicks.

March 28, 2008

Author's Response:

You are right! I need dramatic music. I will add it and some mouse clicks in when I edit the rest of the sounds. Thank you for your review. :)

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Score: 3
Phoenix Wrong: G. Larceny

"too long"

date: March 28, 2008

The scenes are too long, the action is too slow.

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Score: 8
Frisbee Fro

"a glitch"

submission: Frisbee Fro
date: March 28, 2008

There is a glitch: when you press the down key, you can continue to make the frisbee smaller even when it touches the ground.

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Score: 7
Sweet Dice

"Good display!"

submission: Sweet Dice
date: March 19, 2008

I made a dice generator shit myself, but yours totally owns mine, because of the graphics. If you used the Math.random(), then mine is as non-random as yours, because I used it. Where yours owns mine, is in the display of dice. My dice gen doesn't show dice, it only displays a number. Also people were complaining on my submission about the fact that they can't see each die's number, which your submission displays. If anyone wants to see mine, go on my userpage it's in my latest submissions.

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Score: 8
The Red Car

"I <3 my red car"

submission: The Red Car
date: March 12, 2008

It was good, how the guy on the car looked demoniac, and how the first person seemed on the edge of crying. I really liked the ending, where we guess the demon will get knocked by the guy with the baseball bat (which looks a bit like a machete). Overall it was very good.

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