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Proottalfain

Age/Gender: 18, Male
Location: Near Montreal, Canada
Job: Manrod

My username might soon change to "Alfain"... Or not.

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Sign-Up Date:
7/25/06

Level: 13
Aura: Neutral

Rank: Police Officer
Blams: 199
Saves: 506
Rank #: 11,129

Whistle Status: Normal

Exp. Points: 1,630 / 1,880
Exp. Rank #: 20,415
Voting Pow.: 5.47 votes

BBS Posts: 6,472 (5.15 per day)
Flash Reviews: 208
Music Reviews: 48
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0

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208 Reviews | 56 w/ Responses

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Score: 4
Hamination 4

"not very original"

submission: Hamination 4
date: March 28, 2008

Noobs often create threads on the BBS to tell this kind of story. You should add more sound, like a dramatic background music and mouse clicks.

March 28, 2008

Author's Response:

You are right! I need dramatic music. I will add it and some mouse clicks in when I edit the rest of the sounds. Thank you for your review. :)

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Score: 3
Phoenix Wrong: G. Larceny

"too long"

date: March 28, 2008

The scenes are too long, the action is too slow.

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Score: 8
Frisbee Fro

"a glitch"

submission: Frisbee Fro
date: March 28, 2008

There is a glitch: when you press the down key, you can continue to make the frisbee smaller even when it touches the ground.

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Score: 7
Sweet Dice

"Good display!"

submission: Sweet Dice
date: March 19, 2008

I made a dice generator shit myself, but yours totally owns mine, because of the graphics. If you used the Math.random(), then mine is as non-random as yours, because I used it. Where yours owns mine, is in the display of dice. My dice gen doesn't show dice, it only displays a number. Also people were complaining on my submission about the fact that they can't see each die's number, which your submission displays. If anyone wants to see mine, go on my userpage it's in my latest submissions.

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Score: 8
Goat Trip

"Really nice!"

submission: Goat Trip
date: March 12, 2008

This goat rocks! The goat itself is pretty simple animation, but it's very attaching. I liked how it was so happy and colourful. Would be a good advert for shrooms.

March 12, 2008

Author's Response:

I don't really promote drugs. Haha.
It just made a funny movie.

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Score: 0
Fail Cosplay

"slideshow"

submission: Fail Cosplay
date: March 10, 2008

Please don't submit slideshows.

March 30, 2008

Author's Response:

It isn't

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Score: 9
"Fun Shorts" #2

"Very good!"

submission: "Fun Shorts" #2
date: March 10, 2008

It was very good, the fbf animation was very fluid. When I saw the preloader with the hand-drawn text I thought "He had some problems with the gradient fill tool." I understand it I sometimes have difficulties with it. Try using the paintbucket with the "lock fill" option toggled on.

March 10, 2008

Author's Response:

well that's a great advice! and thanx for the review and score too!

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Score: 8
Mouse Worlds

"WOW!"

submission: Mouse Worlds
date: March 3, 2008

This was so good-looking! Gameplay was nice, hard, but not too hard. I really like the concept of we make the screen move.

March 3, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks, this game really did take a while.

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Score: 3
Teh Raiden's stick fight

"ok..."

date: March 3, 2008

It's ok, the ideas of fighting moves are good, but the animation needs practice.

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Score: 4
Dieflash v1.4

"too hard"

submission: Dieflash v1.4
date: March 3, 2008

The game engine is nice, but it's too hard.

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