Proottalfain's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clayground - Mozeck]

good animating

But the story was quite boring. Work on making more interesting stories. Ask your friends. Friends always have good ideas of stories.

BlakTornado responds:

Well it's not that I have bad stories - it's that I write them as I animate so I can't spend time perfecting them nor can I plan out an episode fully. As my camera is going to be in repair for 4 weeks (I dropped it :P) then I shall write out several shorts and see if they're better. if so, it's scripting all the way, baby.

[[KK] big cock xl]

Make it longer...

...Than a 2 seconds loop.

[Koops Ep 1]

does something happen?

or is it only a white rectangle? You want your stuff to pass through judgment? MAKE SOMETHING THAT MOVES, AN ANIMATION!

[darknessdweller]

wrong use of NG

This is not an animation, it's only a card with music. NG is for animations and games, not that kind of stuff. Make an animation if you want it to be protected.

ricksed responds:

it's protected

[Bananfly]

Missing part?

I don't know if it's my CPU that skipped a part or if the part doesn't exist, but we don't see the banana crash on the window, we only see the crashed banana slide.

Aped3sign responds:

Take a bether look.. if you see careful and take forward you can see that he crash into a window.. but in a hurry.

[Lame attempt.]

when you know it's lame...

...don't submit. Practice before submitting stuff. 30 seconds loop aren't interesting.

George-Lucas-III responds:

Wow it passed?
Thanks for helpfull review.

[The Escapeologist]

some parts are too long

Like the part when the motorcycle and cars are in air.

JusticeTeam responds:

Really? My friend thought it was stupid.

[Mr. and Ms. Pacman]

Sound must be fixed

The gunshots were too loud and it made it annoying. Also the moments when they just stare at each other doing nothing are too long.

MixedDrink responds:

Thanks for your advice.
I'll use it when I get the chances,
thanx for the review. ;)

[Spawned of Infinity V2]

doesn't look very random...

Actually it looked very repetitive. Instead of linking to your site for more, put more on the same submission.

[~GG~ DPA collab]

longer

Make it longer and I think CC's spinoff has already been made. Also when you do a spinoff/parody, normally you don't intend to copy those you are mocking. (I'm talking about the idea of really making this gear group)