Proottalfain's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Riku v.s. Riku RPG]

The buttons...

The buttons were too hard to click, in the button's "hit" frame, draw a rectangle the same size as the text. Also the character's movement wasn't fluid (teleportations, sometimes a bit shaky). And it would be nice if there were special effects when the character hits.

[Nifer CreatoR]

Some things should be seperated

You should seperate the earrings from the ears, so that we could choose the ears, and then the earrings. Same for beards.

Ace0fredspades responds:

yepe... but how can I do this? can you show?

[Mental]

really nice, but there are glitches

In the basement level, my big guy could "float". He wasn't stopped by the walls and could go higher floors just by holding the UP key. I made a screenshot of the purple guy between two floors. PM me if you want to see it.

[Fruit Mania]

in-game instructions

yeah it would make the game much better. I really liked the diferent sounds making a song

[~Blox-]

good idea, things to make better

the green ones stick to the red ones which makes it impossible to catch them. Maybe making different speeds for different enemies and different spawn locations (preferably from the outside)

[Master ShoSho]

It's weird...

...to see such a good submission when you just voted on low quality entries!

[Type It]

Good typing exercise!

Reminds me I should learn the typing technique... I'd say putting sound with the letters would help at the beginning. eg: when an x comes out, we would hear a voice saying «x». It would be useful for those who must look at the keyboard when typing.

[Wiggi Jump!]

Levels?

With this type of gameplay, you can only be a loser. You can't "win" this game. It's just a survival mode. Kids probably will be frustrated to lose, because you can only lose. Maybe dividing it in levels would be a good idea. So at least the kid would win levels.

[Make A Face! 1.0]

got many glitches to fix

Put the mustache over the mouth and the hair over the head. It's an acceptable flash. Not many noses, hairs are all in the same bunch, could have many shapes of head.

[Foamy's Wrath The Game]

not bad

It's good for a first game. It's a remake and it's not even your character so it's not original, but you'll learn to do better games. BTW at the end when there is a restart button you should bring back the cursor, because there is none.