Proottalfain's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hamination 4]

not very original

Noobs often create threads on the BBS to tell this kind of story. You should add more sound, like a dramatic background music and mouse clicks.

stormoftara responds:

You are right! I need dramatic music. I will add it and some mouse clicks in when I edit the rest of the sounds. Thank you for your review. :)

[Goat Trip]

Really nice!

This goat rocks! The goat itself is pretty simple animation, but it's very attaching. I liked how it was so happy and colourful. Would be a good advert for shrooms.

Graeme responds:

I don't really promote drugs. Haha.
It just made a funny movie.

["Fun Shorts" #2]

Very good!

It was very good, the fbf animation was very fluid. When I saw the preloader with the hand-drawn text I thought "He had some problems with the gradient fill tool." I understand it I sometimes have difficulties with it. Try using the paintbucket with the "lock fill" option toggled on.

jesmarlesmar responds:

well that's a great advice! and thanx for the review and score too!

[Imagitivity]

Nice!

It fits with the music and brings the viewer in a happy mood! Good job! Tip: when doing drawing fbf, I recommend you go reverse; draw the whole thing, then erase a bit on every next frame, and when done, reverse the frames. This way, you can draw more accurately, and lines look smoother instead of looking like a caterpillar (what I mean by caterpillar is that we can see that the line is made from many bunches of line)

Zairex responds:

Thanks for the tip!

[TTA Mitt Romney]

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This has to be in your username, it's not an animation, it's only a blinking text with a music. constructive criticism that will be useful to the artist: It would be much better if you drew a Mitt Romney talking the text, or animating a part of his speech, or something more original you might find.

JujubeLock responds:

I don't believe in mainstream animation.

[Clock Crew : The Burning]

Normally i don't like CC thingies

But this was well animated, though I didn't understand the jokes (I really wasn't paying attention).

InsulinpumpClock responds:

"I wasn't paying attention but I decided my review would be worthwhile!" Brilliant. Thanks for the below average score on the parts you actually watched!

[Say it Right!]

if ya don't like how he says it

Just tell HIM instead of telling newgrounds.

mako-mage responds:

you know what else I hate, people who bad mouth flash's when they don't have a single one on NG. Durrr.....

[stop motion typography]

Not blamming it

Would be better if it was longer and if it had sense. After just having seen clock crew crappy submissions, I was definitly not going to blam this thing.

OmegaUltimaWill responds:

Well, it would have been longer but, 117 images to copy and paste into flash and then move into the corner because I forgot to resize was long and laggy-for-my-computer-y enough for today heh. But yeah, I'll be doing longer and better ones.

Had to cut out 99 m's for this too!
And stencil them. Sorry, just a bit of back story heh. Well, thanks for the not blamming!

[The Kennysheep Doodle]

sounds are annoying

The erase and draw sounds are very annoying.

KennySheep responds:

I thought they were necessary.

Although If you hate the sound of pencil, I pity you when you go to school.

[Mouse War 1]

Hard to keep track

Keep in mind that us, the viewers, have to be able to see all the action. Don't make too many things move in the same time.

The-stick-dude responds:

I am aware of this problem, but without that happening it would seem like more of a turn by turn fight.