Proottalfain's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clayground - Mozeck]

good animating

But the story was quite boring. Work on making more interesting stories. Ask your friends. Friends always have good ideas of stories.

BlakTornado responds:

Well it's not that I have bad stories - it's that I write them as I animate so I can't spend time perfecting them nor can I plan out an episode fully. As my camera is going to be in repair for 4 weeks (I dropped it :P) then I shall write out several shorts and see if they're better. if so, it's scripting all the way, baby.

[darknessdweller]

wrong use of NG

This is not an animation, it's only a card with music. NG is for animations and games, not that kind of stuff. Make an animation if you want it to be protected.

ricksed responds:

it's protected

[Bananfly]

Missing part?

I don't know if it's my CPU that skipped a part or if the part doesn't exist, but we don't see the banana crash on the window, we only see the crashed banana slide.

Aped3sign responds:

Take a bether look.. if you see careful and take forward you can see that he crash into a window.. but in a hurry.

[Lame attempt.]

when you know it's lame...

...don't submit. Practice before submitting stuff. 30 seconds loop aren't interesting.

George-Lucas-III responds:

Wow it passed?
Thanks for helpfull review.

[The Escapeologist]

some parts are too long

Like the part when the motorcycle and cars are in air.

JusticeTeam responds:

Really? My friend thought it was stupid.

[Mr. and Ms. Pacman]

Sound must be fixed

The gunshots were too loud and it made it annoying. Also the moments when they just stare at each other doing nothing are too long.

MixedDrink responds:

Thanks for your advice.
I'll use it when I get the chances,
thanx for the review. ;)

[Justin-baileys Newgrounds]

couldn't understand

I just can't understand what you're saying. Maybe you'd get a better score if the audio was more distinguishable. In that case, and if what you're saying is funny, then I'd protect it. The animation is (purposefully) bad. So you must rely on the audio.

JUSTIN-BAILEY responds:

Actually it wasn't.

[Mission: Start of '08]

hard to judge on that...

I don't really know why I'm protecting this... Originality, maybe?

ttstrangler responds:

Kind of agreed a little... I barely see any original Flash animations anymore... but the way you kind of put it made it a little offensive. I know my animation isn't the best thing in the world, but nobody's perfect when they start out. ;)

[The Madness Code 2]

Animation wasn't fluid at all

you definitly need to practice your animation and don't try to go too fast making it.

DP responds:

I had to shorten it. The file was to big. Besides you have no experience in flash so don't give me your bullcrap,

[Anamnesis]

Nothing extraordinary 'bout it

I think all this has been far too overrated. The awards are probably because this submission is a good advertisement for NG. I'm not accusing indigoApe, he said it was overrated. If it wasn't overrated, I would have been giving you a higher score. This flash is only short sequences of animation, some still images, all that with a nice music. Nothing impressive with that. It's an ok flash, not more than that. It's only a kind of slideshow, not even a story, the different characters almost don't interact (except Pico's bullets).

indigoApe responds:

Yep, couldn't agree more.

Thanks for the review.