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good animating

But the story was quite boring. Work on making more interesting stories. Ask your friends. Friends always have good ideas of stories.

BlakTornado responds:

Well it's not that I have bad stories - it's that I write them as I animate so I can't spend time perfecting them nor can I plan out an episode fully. As my camera is going to be in repair for 4 weeks (I dropped it :P) then I shall write out several shorts and see if they're better. if so, it's scripting all the way, baby.

Make it longer...

...Than a 2 seconds loop.

does something happen?

or is it only a white rectangle? You want your stuff to pass through judgment? MAKE SOMETHING THAT MOVES, AN ANIMATION!

Missing part?

I don't know if it's my CPU that skipped a part or if the part doesn't exist, but we don't see the banana crash on the window, we only see the crashed banana slide.

Aped3sign responds:

Take a bether look.. if you see careful and take forward you can see that he crash into a window.. but in a hurry.

when you know it's lame...

...don't submit. Practice before submitting stuff. 30 seconds loop aren't interesting.

George-Lucas-III responds:

Wow it passed?
Thanks for helpfull review.

some parts are too long

Like the part when the motorcycle and cars are in air.

JusticeTeam responds:

Really? My friend thought it was stupid.

doesn't look very random...

Actually it looked very repetitive. Instead of linking to your site for more, put more on the same submission.

longer

Make it longer and I think CC's spinoff has already been made. Also when you do a spinoff/parody, normally you don't intend to copy those you are mocking. (I'm talking about the idea of really making this gear group)

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