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Nice!

Looks great, but really too short.

not very original

Noobs often create threads on the BBS to tell this kind of story. You should add more sound, like a dramatic background music and mouse clicks.

stormoftara responds:

You are right! I need dramatic music. I will add it and some mouse clicks in when I edit the rest of the sounds. Thank you for your review. :)

too long

The scenes are too long, the action is too slow.

Really nice!

This goat rocks! The goat itself is pretty simple animation, but it's very attaching. I liked how it was so happy and colourful. Would be a good advert for shrooms.

Graeme responds:

I don't really promote drugs. Haha.
It just made a funny movie.

Very good!

It was very good, the fbf animation was very fluid. When I saw the preloader with the hand-drawn text I thought "He had some problems with the gradient fill tool." I understand it I sometimes have difficulties with it. Try using the paintbucket with the "lock fill" option toggled on.

jesmarlesmar responds:

well that's a great advice! and thanx for the review and score too!

ok...

It's ok, the ideas of fighting moves are good, but the animation needs practice.

Complete it

I didn't see it entirely, but from what I've seen, it's just a guy talking. You should put flashbacks of what he's talking about. Also find a way to remove the two white stripes, they're annoying.

oh noes...

Please, not another spam crew? <constructive criticism>The preloader is just awesome, the character drawing too, but it would be nice if it was animated, and if it had a storyline. The music was nice too.</constructive criticism>

needs more work put into it

the swords dont follow, and you need to put more work into it. For your sound problem, when your flash is finished, go to files>export movie and when you choose the export options, make the mp3 bit rate lower. I use 80 kbps, but if you have many songs, use a lower bit rate. If you compressed it the more you can without losing too much quality, get to know what length of the songs you use in the movie, and use a sound editor to cut only that part of the song and import it to your flash. This way it won't load a useless part of the song.

wow!

Very good-looking and interesting, yet simple. You stayed on the "line" theme, in black and white, with the song that fits. I liked how the lines were playing around the credits.

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