Proottalfain's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hamination 4]

not very original

Noobs often create threads on the BBS to tell this kind of story. You should add more sound, like a dramatic background music and mouse clicks.

stormoftara responds:

You are right! I need dramatic music. I will add it and some mouse clicks in when I edit the rest of the sounds. Thank you for your review. :)

[Phoenix Wrong: G. Larceny]

too long

The scenes are too long, the action is too slow.

[Goat Trip]

Really nice!

This goat rocks! The goat itself is pretty simple animation, but it's very attaching. I liked how it was so happy and colourful. Would be a good advert for shrooms.

Graeme responds:

I don't really promote drugs. Haha.
It just made a funny movie.

["Fun Shorts" #2]

Very good!

It was very good, the fbf animation was very fluid. When I saw the preloader with the hand-drawn text I thought "He had some problems with the gradient fill tool." I understand it I sometimes have difficulties with it. Try using the paintbucket with the "lock fill" option toggled on.

jesmarlesmar responds:

well that's a great advice! and thanx for the review and score too!

[Teh Raiden's stick fight]

ok...

It's ok, the ideas of fighting moves are good, but the animation needs practice.

[Serial killers teaser]

Complete it

I didn't see it entirely, but from what I've seen, it's just a guy talking. You should put flashbacks of what he's talking about. Also find a way to remove the two white stripes, they're annoying.

[[L*]Under the Sea]

oh noes...

Please, not another spam crew? <constructive criticism>The preloader is just awesome, the character drawing too, but it would be nice if it was animated, and if it had a storyline. The music was nice too.</constructive criticism>

[What Lines Do]

wow!

Very good-looking and interesting, yet simple. You stayed on the "line" theme, in black and white, with the song that fits. I liked how the lines were playing around the credits.