This is perfect
I've watched it many times on youtube (and fav'ed), it was posted by futureshorts. I didn't know this was on NG and it's going straight to my favorites.
This is perfect
I've watched it many times on youtube (and fav'ed), it was posted by futureshorts. I didn't know this was on NG and it's going straight to my favorites.
Nice drawings, but...
I don't like slideshows.
We couldn't see what was happening.
Everything lasted about 5 frames and even though it was fast it definitely wasn't smooth. Also try using something else than the pencil.
I couldnt see anything happing to your penis eather oh wait..... you dont have 1
Not too bad...
It was short, had not much animating and no plot, but I think it's still ok.
well good
good fbf!
I liked it a lot, it was weird and intriguing.
RAWR
I heard the elevator song and "In the hall of the mountain king"
There weren't many jokes.
there was, but they're personel.
Should have yelled
There was one hell of a punchy ending, but he should have yelled "Falcon [something]!" and his whole body should have participated in the action. It's a bit short, but it doesn't matter if the end is THAT punchy.
Overall pretty awesome.
It does mention Winter
I think it mentions Winter enough. The guy is mentally ill and Winter makes him even more depressed and hopeless. I liked the drawing style a lot, but the two characters were hardly distinguishable one from the other. The girl's face and dialogue should have been less shaky than the guy's imo.
RAWR
So your name's Rachel, huh? Not much to say except your animation got much better since then (more fluid)
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