Proottalfain's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Head Bang]

higher fps

I guess it's played at 12 fps. Increase it for more fluid movements (especially for camera moves). And if you know it's short, why not spending more time in a cartoon to make it longer?

[Justin-baileys Newgrounds]

couldn't understand

I just can't understand what you're saying. Maybe you'd get a better score if the audio was more distinguishable. In that case, and if what you're saying is funny, then I'd protect it. The animation is (purposefully) bad. So you must rely on the audio.

JUSTIN-BAILEY responds:

Actually it wasn't.

[The Arma [Pivot]]

Good action!

To improve it you could make it longer and maybe add a storyline

[Elementar 2]

speeds could be better

some things could be faster, like the fire ball. Overall good game

[The attack of the blobs]

sound FX

since it's not a music video, add sound effects to your submission.

[Mario and Corio]

I urged to click

...on the 0/5 to be sure it gets blammed as fast as possible. Don't try to talk like an idiot, it's not funny.

[A Simple Light]

very original!

The only suggestion I may give is that the paper on which he throws the cigarette could have been water to stay with the theme.

[Disturbing Luigi!!!]

good jokes!

The animation was ok, but the storyline was good, which fully compensates. Good job!

[Mission: Start of '08]

hard to judge on that...

I don't really know why I'm protecting this... Originality, maybe?

ttstrangler responds:

Kind of agreed a little... I barely see any original Flash animations anymore... but the way you kind of put it made it a little offensive. I know my animation isn't the best thing in the world, but nobody's perfect when they start out. ;)

[The Madness Code 2]

Animation wasn't fluid at all

you definitly need to practice your animation and don't try to go too fast making it.

DP responds:

I had to shorten it. The file was to big. Besides you have no experience in flash so don't give me your bullcrap,